Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Chpt 2: The Destroyer and The Savior

Blogger's Notes: Ok, with this, it is Chpt2 now. do leave lots of comments about what you liked about the story and what you didn't so the next chpt can be better. Do not hesitate to introduce this story and also the others to your friends.

"We are the Nesohc Fo Sdrows." Sayol Renshii said.

"I know. I have heard much about you Sdrows from my travels." Theresa replied.

"I'd like to ask you to join my comrades and I at reporting to HQ and if possible I would like to recommend you to join us." Sayol offered.

"What!?" the other Sdrows exclaimed.

"Have you lost it Renshii? How can you offer that to a mere woman?" one of them shouted.

"Mere woman? Don't forget she tried to save us Sdrows and could fight almost equally with a Xoark that 5 of us could not even beat." Sayol retorted.

"Tch..." the guy went silent.

"Not to mention she possesses it." Sayol added.

"You can't be serious..." all eyes were on Theresa.

Theresa simply raised her sword up and they saw sword she wielded. That instant, all their weapons started to vibrate as if in resonance to each other. This was a signal that informs its user that they are in the presence of a Drows. It is a group of ancient artifacts said to have been left behind by divine beings who were responsible for the creation of the world.

Something happened in the past that caused these divine beings to cease existance but remnants of their power formed and materialized into the Drows. The Drows are of all shapes and sizes but many of them are in the form of swords.

After escorting Theresa to their HQ, they were reported to the briefing room where they were greeted by the General Commander.

"Welcome Theresa! I am General Commander Rowin. I hear you have saved my subordinates lives. I thank you." he introduced himself.

"Don't mention it, I did not really save them... I had to be saved myself." Theresa humbly replied.

"So I have heard. But nonetheless, if it weren't for you would have lost their lives then." General Commander Rowin argued.

Theresa did not argue further.

"I would like to cut to the chase. The Drow you possess, I would like to take it from you. Only a Sdrow from our ranks can possess a Drow and sadly, you are not of our ranks so I have to ask you relinquish your Drow to us." Rowin said bluntly.

Backing a few steps behind, Theresa quickly raised her hand to the hilt of her Drow.

"Never! This Drow is all I have left of my family and no one can take it from me! I would die than give it up!" Theresa screamed.

Unfazed, General Commander Rowin continued.

"I was not finished yet my dear, I apologise for giving you the wrong idea. Although I did say that those not of our ranks cannot own a Drow, that can be easily solved by simply giving you a chance to join our ranks. That would solve the problem no?"

Relaxing, Theresa regained some of her composure.

"So if I agree to join your ranks, I can keep my Drow, is that it?" she asked.

"Yes, I will simply register your name into our ranks. I need you to Think of a codename for yourself though. Do you need sometime to think about it?" Rowin comfirmed.

"No need, I will join you and you can refer me by my stage name, The Flower Goddess." Theresa replied.

"Flower Goddess...Very well, I would need to check the archives on the name of your Drow unless you know it?" Rowin asked.

"No, I don't. I only knew of this Drow when my mother gave it to me the night she was slaughtered..." Theresa replied bitterly.

"I am...sorry. Allow Sayol to show you around HQ while i check up on it." Rowin sympathised.

Minutes later, Sayol was giving Theresa a tour of the HQ, explaining to her the mission of the Sdrows.

"So, simply put, legends say that the divine beings who created this world were wiped out by Kalastros the god of the Xoarks but not without leaving behind the Drows which is to be used against the Xoarks and maintain a seal they had put on Kalastros." Sayol finished.

"So you are telling me that the Drows are weapons against the Xoarks and that your organization was built upon that very purpose?" Theresa asked.

"Exactly. That is also the reason why we seek people who possess Drows to join us if they are willing or else, give them up to us while we find suitable users." Sayol replied.

"And if they refuse?" Theresa questioned further.

"If they refuse, they will be charged with insubordination and thrown into jail, be they children or women. If they resist then they will be executed on the spot for treason against human kind." Sayol bluntly replied.

Theresa was shocked that his answer. Sayol looked barely over 17 years old and yet, he spoke as if he had lived longer than that. If i had resisted, would they have killed me too? she thought to herself.

"Well, I suppose I should send you to your new quarters now. Looking forward to working with you." Sayol quickly changed the subject and guided Theresa to her room.

For the next few weeks, Theresa under went strict training sessions and was taught about the Drows and its history. Of the many Drows known to man, Theresa was only interested in the one known as the Demon Sword. This she was sure, that sword was the murder weapon by the one who killed her family. The passion of revenge stirred even more within her.

Now, she was a full fledged member of the Neshoc Fo Sdrows. Her first mission was to team up with Sayol's squad and rescue captured civilians in a building attacked by a Xoark. With 2 of the most promising Neshoc fighting hand in hand, the operation went smoothly until they tried to rescue the last group of hostages.This Xoark had already released its Resurgence and had the appearance of a scorpion and threatened to poison a little girl held in its claws.

At a lost at what to do, Theresa faltered for a moment. Then Sayol raised his blade toward the Xoark. "Despicable being, I shall rid the world of you once and for all!" He shouted. "I don't think so, I still have this little girl hostage and I will harm her if you take another step closer!" the Xoark jested. Sayol grinned ominously for a moment. "Go ahead,I will just take revenge for her afterward. That is a useless threat." he replied coldly.

Theresa's eyes widened in shock. Sayol is just barely of age, how could he be so extreme? "Sayol, you can't! She is only a child with a bright future ahead of her! You cannot just end her life like that!" Theresa protested. "She is only a small sacrifice for a greater good. She should be proud." Sayol quietly replied, still advancing to the Xoark.

"I can't watch this any further." a familiar voice echoed behind them. In a flash, the Xoark's claw was hacked off and it barely defended itself from a slash by the hooded man before. All present were shocked at the sight of the sword he possessed. The Scorpion Xoark scuttled back a few steps and went into what looks like a bow to the man. "M-my Lord, why are you with the humans? His majesty is anxious for your return..." With out waiting for the Xoark to finish, the man whipped around and stabbed the Xoark in the face, his hand vibrating vigorously, the Xoark's face was ripped to shreds and it fell to the ground dead.

Sheathing the sword behind him, the man started to walk away when Sayol stood in his path. "Destroyer!! I, the Saviour of all mankind will strike you down right here and now with the holy sword I possess!!" Shaking his head, the man heaved an audible sigh. "Not that whole 'Destroyer' thing again..."

Monday, September 8, 2008

Chpt 1: Prologue and the Nesohc Fo Sdrows

Blogger's Notes: So sorry for the lack of updates, i have taken up a one month job at Chinese Garden as a Lion Dance Performer. Its a very taxing job and by the time i get home at night, i am pretty much too beat to write anything. So as a special, today i will not only update one blog, i am going to update all of them!! so here goes!

One dark and stormy night, a large manor was bustling with activity. There was screaming and running as the creatures known as Xoarks scurried around.

"Faster, you worms!!" Screamed a larger sized Xoark.

"We must find him at all costs or we are doomed!" screamed another.

This creatures scurried around franticly, searching for something. Just what were they searching for?

"Well? Where is he?" boomed the voice of a Xoark the size of a human.

"Y...your Majesty! F...forgive us, we have yet to find him..." wimpered one of the Xoarks.

"Then what are you all waiting for? DOUBLE THE SEARCH!!!" screamed the Xoark.

Suddenly,

"Your Majesty!!" screamed a Xoark, running from the direction of the main hall.

"What is it!?" the King Xpark roared back.

"Your Majesty...You are needed at the Main Hall at once! It is a disaster!"

"What!? I will be there shortly. Go."

Moments later, the King Xoark stormed into the Main Hall and scanned the area closely. Strangely, nothing has been touched, puzzled, he quickly ran through all important artifacts within the Hall.

Suddenly, it came to him. Running to his seat at the back of the Hall, he stared at the empty wall above the seat. Eyes widening in fury, the the night was disturbed by his great roar.

"ARL ASTERIO!!!!!!!!!!"


2 years later, walking past Clarke Quay was a young man, no older than 24 yrs old, carrying a long package on his back and wearing a hooded cloak. Suddenly, he heard music that caught his attention. Looking up, he saw a woman dancing just beside the bridge leading to the esplanade.

Mesmerized, the young man edged closer. The flow, the gracefulness eminating from the woman had attracted a large crowd and they were staring wide eyed. The young man could have sworn that the flower bushes around them seemed to be blooming bit by bit.

Looking back at the woman, he suddenly felt the package behind him start to vibrate violently. Alarmed, he gazed around, expecting to see something or someone. When he was certain there was nothing around, he turned back to the woman.

To his surprise, there it was! Right behind the woman, lying on the floor is another package wrapped up in a long cloth, just like his was. A small grin appeared on his face. Just then...

"Stop Right There! Filthy creature!" shouted someone from a distance away.

Whipping around, the crowd saw a hideous creature heading their way and they quickly dispersed, many of them screaming the word, Xoarks. Close behind the Xoark was several people dressed in white uniforms with guards protecting their vital points. Each of them were carrying a weapon.

Dashing pass the young man, Xoark's eyes widen in shock as he recognized the person. Turning around, he stared.

"You..." he began when the white uniforms were about to catch up.

"Tsk...No choice now." the Xoark quickly turn and fled.

The white uniforms reached the area soon after and one of them stopped to check out the situation while the rest gave chase.

"Are you alright, stranger?" he asked the young man.

Saying nothing, the young man merely nodded.

"That's good. You are lucky, those abominations normally would not give up a chance to capture a hostage." the white uniform said.

Turning to face the woman, he asked.

"Are you alright too?"

"Yes thank you." nodded the woman.

Satisfied with everything, the white uniform pursued his comrades. as the white figure grew smaller and smaller, the young man felt the woman's gaze on him grow stronger and stronger.

Finally, she quickly packed her things and left the scene. All the while, the young man could feel the vibrations on his package grow stronger. Smiling to himself, he started walking in the direction of the chase and when he was out of site, gave a large leap and followed the white uniforms closely.

Moments later, he was surprised to see the young woman following the white uniforms as well, carrying with her, a sword. A wide smile appeared on his lips as they followed the white uniforms.

Eventually, they cornered the Xoark and started attacking it. Though it seems like they had overwealming advantage in numbers, the white uniforms weren't particularly powerful individually. The Xoark overpowered them and as he was about to deal the finishing blow, he was stopped by the white uniform that had stayed behind.

"I don't think so, Monster!" he shouted.

Standing at the top of a building, the young man was amazed at the young white uniform's powers. However, if you think that that is all the Xoarks are capable of, you are deadly mistaken. he thought as he could sense that the white uniform was giving his all.

True enough, the Xoark pushed the white uniform back and unleashed what I will now refer to as The Resurgence. It is the process of which a Xoark will evolve from a human sized creature into a full blown monster. Not all Xoarks are able to do this as it requires much skill and time to accomplish but for a Xoark capable of a Resurgence, it would not only be able to exponentially increase its powers, but also gain abilities dependant on what they were based on. All Xoarks are different in that sense.

This particular Xoark is based on the Praying Mantis. Therefore, it now possesses 6 arms all ending with blades. Caught completely off guard, the white uniform only managed to dodge the attacks aimed at his vitals.

"Prepare to die! Foolish human!" the Xoark screamed, raining relentless blows on the white uniform.

Just as he was about to be dealt the final blow, the woman dashed in. Using light and graceful movements, she deflected all the blades and rescued the white uniform.

"I will be your opponent from now! When I defeat you, you must answer my questions!" the woman said.

"Only if you can beat me, Dancing Bitch!" hissed the Xoark.

A fierce battle ensued. The young man and the white uniforms were completely amazed. One woman could fight on an even match with a Xoark that 5 white uniforms, obviously trained in combat could not beat.

However, this woman definitely lacks experience against a Resurgenced Xoark as she kept aiming for points fatal only to human Xoarks, rendering many of her attacks useless.

In a sneak attack, the Xoark unleashed a hidden pair of arms after locking blades with the woman. Caught off guard also, the woman was seriously injured.

"Despicable bastard!" she growled.

"Little bitch, this is called a fight for life or death. Now, DIE all of you!" retorted the Xoark.

This is not good, I cannot let him escape. the young man thought. Unwrapping the package revealing a large sword as well, he gripped the hilt tightly waiting for the moment the Mantis Xoark let its guard down.

In the moment the Mantis Xoark struck, the young man made his move. In a flash, he hacked off all the limbs of the Xoark.

"I am sorry, but i cannot let you live any longer." the young man whispered.

"What!? Y...you...How can you do this!? Its against the law!" the Xoark shrieked.

"Law? I am not bound by any law." the young man retorted.

Roaring with rage, the Mantis Xoark quickly regenerated its broken limbs and hacked away at the mysterious person. Strangely, when the blades reached a certain distance from the young man, it got hacked off. All this time the man had not moved from the spot.

From the distance, the white uniforms and the woman could clearly see the radius of which surrounded the young man and the Xoark kept regenerating only to have the limb cut off moments later.

Eventually, the rate of regeneration slowed considerably as the Xoark started to tire and the young man started to move forward. The woman then caught a glimpse of the face under the hood and she was shocked at the sight of the young man's eyes. They were yellow and had a slit inside.

Jumping forward pass the Xoark, the young man landed softly on the ground and started walking away. Whipping aroung, the Xoark stared at his back and before he could utter a word, its body blew up into bits with blood splurting everywhere.

Sheathing the sword again, the young man quickly fled the scene and left the others behind. Slowly recovering, the young white uniform help the young woman up.

"You are really strong, whats your name?" he asked.

"Thank you, my name is Theresa Claire Von Schneider." Theresa replied.

"I am Sayol Renshii and we are the Nesohc Fo Sdrows." Sayol Renshii introduced.

Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Oooops, a minor mistake

Well, it appears in my excitement at putting up the new blog, i forgot to put the link there. Here it is http://sacredforcerevelations.blogspot.com

Sunday, August 24, 2008

New Blog Up

Ok, the 3rd blog is up. I had trouble because i could not think of a good name for it. I still think the name is kinda weird but i will let it slide. look forward to the first chapter and new chapters on the way!

Thursday, August 21, 2008

Hiya all!!

Well, i said i would come up with a new story so here it is!

For all long time readers, ignore this, this is for newer readers. For you to know, i have another blog here http://fanficsjaystyle.blogspot.com/ There is no relation whatsoever between these 2 even for another blog coming up soon.

Therefore, i will be having 3 stories ongoing. Do be patient as it might take some time to update. also, if any one is interested in drawing do let me know as i am looking for artists to draw pics if needed to facilitate understanding for the story.

Now if you have read my first blog, good, if not, do so now to get a small review on the story as i am a lazy twit and i am onli gonna tell you that this blog is related to the second story. Look forward to the first chapter and the next blog, which i will post probably tomorrow or the day after.